Wednesday, 22 April 2020
Titan- Isolation
The Isolation was huge. The Men could see Mountains in the distance but they were stranded in a House. Suddenly they all heard rocks coming down from the sky but they were just platforms to get to the surface. The Men were a little scared because some of them are afraid of heights. They went one at a time and they all made it!. Now the Men had to find their way to the place that needed help. One of the Men had a compass then they remembered that they were heading to the North East Coast. They were far ahead so they needed something to help them. They couldn’t think of anything but the only thing that they could do is go through the Mountains. The Men were marching in a line through the Mountains. They found nothing at all but when they were in the middle of all the Mountains they could see a Motorboat. It was stranded in the middle of nowhere. All of them could fit but when they activated the Motorboat it was working but it didn’t have enough fuel. The Men were worried so they took a break and tranquil their quest. They had a good break and now they needed to find the fuel. While they were looking they found it on top of a palm tree. They were shaking it down and it nearly dropped on the ground. They put the fuel in the motorboat and it was ready to go. The moment they pressed it went so fast!. The Men checked what kind of fuel it was and it was super fuel. Things just got a whole lot faster!........To be Continued…….
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I love your first sentence Titan, it really hooked me in to reading the rest of your story.
ReplyDeleteKa pai Titan, I love how you built the story up. It was getting more and more tense with every sentence. It reminded me of a scene form Lord of the Rings when they had to cross the mountains even though they knew it was dangerous. I can't wait for part 2! Maybe in part 2 you could split your sentences into paragraphs to make it a bit easier to read.
ReplyDeleteThanks Phil and Mrs Haines for your comments. I like how both of you like my story but I could've made paragraphs but maybe in the next one.
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